Story is King

Ever since Neanderthals first told fireside tales of the hunt, stories have had to be engaging, distinctive, resonating, and satisfying in order to earn audience interest – and not get the storyteller booed out of the cave.

As script editor and funding assessor, Patrick O’Driscoll delivers honest, cohesive, actionable development assistance aimed at meeting a writer or creative team’s objectives and maximising a story’s ability to compete in its target market. Patrick’s services cover all levels of development, from budding synopses, treatments, and early draft scripts to finance-seeking production packages.

He collaborates closely with writers, producers, and creative teams from Ireland, UK, US and Australia, developing projects of all genres and formats, aimed at diverse markets. From his base in Cork, Ireland, Patrick also consults with public funding bodies there (CnaM) and in the UK (NIS), evaluating fiction and factual film/TV proposals in support of funding decisions.

Whether he is helping writers to strengthen their stories or selecting financeable projects with funding organisations, Patrick’s guiding focus is on a story’s ability to emotionally move its primary audience – a value that stems from his background in writing, a lifelong appreciation of cinematic narratives, and his desire to keep storytellers from being booed out of their respective caves.

Script Services

Feedback Report

Sharper than industry-standard analysis, this report provides a comprehensive examination of the script’s story elements with solid suggestions.  For writers who need to pinpoint and resolve a number of narrative issues.

Advanced Development Notes

Useful if preparing a strong rewrite, this report delivers a deep assessment of primary and secondary story elements along with detailed recommendations.  The analysis is focused on enhancing the narrative’s overall quality and its distinctive sell.

Funding Proposal Assessment

For companies and producers preparing Irish and/or UK financing applications, this customisable service provides a realistic and constructive assessment of a complete funding proposal with the aim of strengthening its effectiveness and viability.

Script Editing

For writers and creative teams undertaking a challenging
rewrite, this service provides written and in-person development assistance.  Close collaborations involve an agreed number of creative meetings and assessment reports over a fixed period.

Recent Articles

Dramatic Tension – don’t let them go (part II)

Keeping audiences hooked relies on meaningful dramatic questions, yet few stories will generate tension on the most meaningful level of all.

Dramatic Tension – don’t let them go (part I)

Clever concepts, genre staples, and rare characters can entice audiences, but without story-long dramatic tension your script will struggle to keep them engaged. The more levels on which your script tries to wield story-long tension, the more chance it has of holding its audience until the end.

Character Behaviour – 3 important touchstones

Personality goes a long way, but if a protagonist’s behaviour is not well thought-out, their winning persona won’t save them from audience disinterest. Script readers keep basic touchstones in mind concerning a protagonist’s Activity, Believability, and Rationale.

Courses and Clips

5 Week Course – “Screenwriting: Tools, not Rules.”

October 31st – November 28th, 2018

Film In Cork is hosting evening classes by Patrick O’Driscoll for new-to-intermediate level screenwriters aimed at helping participants to develop their screenwriting approaches and skills.

Course details published by Screen Skills Ireland here.

Weekend Workshop – “Script Writing: Expanding the Toolbox”

July 23rd and 24th, 2016

Comprehensively exploring screenwriting’s primary elements, Patrick O’Driscoll’s course is about increasing writers’ knowledge of modern screenwriting standards and enhancing their storytelling abilities.

Workshop details published by Media Makers Ltd. here.

Film in Cork (screen commission) – Interview

Film in Cork catch up with Cork-based script editor and development consultant Patrick O’Driscoll.

Interview published by Film in Cork here.


5 Tips for New Screenwriters

February 6, 2014

Story analyst and script editor Patrick O’Driscoll lays out his 5 tips for aspiring screenwriters – some solid advice you should be made aware of as you begin your journey.

Article published by Film Ireland here.

Testimonials

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Service: Screenwriting Course – “Tools, Not Rules”

“I recently took a popular screenwriting course, which I would have thought was good had I not taken Patrick’s course ‘Screenwriting: Tools, not Rules’ first. His classes really blew open my thinking on writing. And it has stuck. I am ripping into all my stories again with a new perspective on what is needed to create a great piece of writing. Every aspect, element, method was covered with wide-ranging examples. His understanding of the industry and the craft was impressive but what struck me most was how much effort and professionalism he brought to his classes in order for students to get the absolute most out of them. I teach a film course in France every summer, so I have an idea of the work that goes into prep. If you are serious about screenwriting, Patrick’s course is an absolute must.”

Brian Benjamin Dwyer – Creative Director, Madra Mór Productions
Cork, Ireland
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