Story is King
Ever since Neanderthals first told fireside tales of the hunt, stories have had to be engaging, distinctive, resonating, and satisfying in order to earn audience interest – and not get the storyteller booed out of the cave.
As script editor and funding assessor, Patrick O’Driscoll delivers honest, cohesive, actionable development assistance aimed at meeting a writer or creative team’s objectives and maximising a story’s ability to compete in its target market. Patrick’s services cover all levels of development, from budding synopses, treatments, and early draft scripts to finance-seeking production packages.
He collaborates closely with writers, producers, and creative teams from Ireland, UK, US and Australia, developing projects of all genres and formats, aimed at diverse markets. From his base in Cork, Ireland, Patrick also consults with public funding bodies there (CnaM) and in the UK (NIS), evaluating fiction and factual film/TV proposals in support of funding decisions.
Whether he is helping writers to strengthen their stories or selecting financeable projects with funding organisations, Patrick’s guiding focus is on a story’s ability to emotionally move its primary audience – a value that stems from his background in writing, a lifelong appreciation of cinematic narratives, and his desire to keep storytellers from being booed out of their respective caves.
Script Services
Feedback Report
Sharper than industry-standard analysis, this report provides a comprehensive examination of the script’s story elements with solid suggestions. For writers who need to pinpoint and resolve a number of narrative issues.
Advanced Development Notes
Useful if preparing a strong rewrite, this report delivers a deep assessment of primary and secondary story elements along with detailed recommendations. The analysis is focused on enhancing the narrative’s overall quality and its distinctive sell.
Funding Proposal Assessment
Script Editing
For writers and creative teams undertaking a challenging
rewrite, this service provides written and in-person development assistance. Close collaborations involve an agreed number of creative meetings and assessment reports over a fixed period.
Recent Articles
Courses and Clips
5 Week Course – “Screenwriting: Tools, not Rules.”
October 31st – November 28th, 2018
Film In Cork is hosting evening classes by Patrick O’Driscoll for new-to-intermediate level screenwriters aimed at helping participants to develop their screenwriting approaches and skills.
Course details published by Screen Skills Ireland here.
Weekend Workshop – “Script Writing: Expanding the Toolbox”
July 23rd and 24th, 2016
Comprehensively exploring screenwriting’s primary elements, Patrick O’Driscoll’s course is about increasing writers’ knowledge of modern screenwriting standards and enhancing their storytelling abilities.
Workshop details published by Media Makers Ltd. here.
Film in Cork (screen commission) – Interview
Film in Cork catch up with Cork-based script editor and development consultant Patrick O’Driscoll.
Interview published by Film in Cork here.
5 Tips for New Screenwriters
February 6, 2014
Story analyst and script editor Patrick O’Driscoll lays out his 5 tips for aspiring screenwriters – some solid advice you should be made aware of as you begin your journey.
Article published by Film Ireland here.
Testimonials






“I recently took a popular screenwriting course, which I would have thought was good had I not taken Patrick’s course ‘Screenwriting: Tools, not Rules’ first. His classes really blew open my thinking on writing. And it has stuck. I am ripping into all my stories again with a new perspective on what is needed to create a great piece of writing. Every aspect, element, method was covered with wide-ranging examples. His understanding of the industry and the craft was impressive but what struck me most was how much effort and professionalism he brought to his classes in order for students to get the absolute most out of them. I teach a film course in France every summer, so I have an idea of the work that goes into prep. If you are serious about screenwriting, Patrick’s course is an absolute must.”
Cork, Ireland
Phone Consultations
“I decided to tackle a tricky double adaptation and got myself treed with the first draft. When I came to Patrick, I had already been to one script consultant (with underwhelming results) but on the strength of his client testimonials, I took another throw and had Patrick write an advanced development report and a set of page notes. It was the best investment in my writing I possibly could have made. The depth, detail, and sophistication of Patrick’s analysis was truly astonishing. He immediately grasped the story I was trying to tell and identified straight away where it was foundering, as well as registering its strengths. These are the notes every writer hopes for. I wouldn’t consider taking my future projects to anyone else.”
Elko, Nevada, USA
and Phone Consultation
"For his diligence and attention to detail in collaborating on my project, I cannot recommend Patrick highly enough. As a new writer, working with him has been enormously valuable in learning how to become a stronger storyteller. I felt like I’ve had my own personal screenwriting tutor. Hopefully, I can take what I’ve learned from him and continue to improve my craft in leaps and bounds."
Glasgow, Scotland
“We worked with Patrick over the course of a year, doing extended development on two drafts of an Irish/Australian co/pro feature film with funding support from the South Australian Film Corporation. Patrick’s approach to story structure and the precision of his analysis meant that we were able to compress four or five drafts into two. The writer gained enormously from Patrick’s expertise, which is reflected in the quality of the screenplay. Patrick’s detailed and insightful notes are incomparable to any story developer I have worked with and the funding agency were also blown away by his work. It’s an acknowledged truism that a writer is as good as the developer they’re working with. Patrick will elevate any writer worth their salt, with his tireless commitment to developing screenwriting craft, honouring the story, and pushing the writer to do their best work. We will work with him again and again.”
Adelaide, Australia
Development Notes
"I first approached Patrick looking for someone to provide coverage (specifically "Hollywood coverage") on an adaptation I had shepherded. I have people here that I use but since the story was set in the west of Ireland I wanted an Irish reality check on the script’s characters, dialogue and world. Patrick’s coverage roundly delivered on that but also thoroughly assessed every other element, showing up things we hadn’t considered. His notes were so practical, proficient and honest (absolutely no BS) that I’ve been returning to exploit his skills ever since. He’s worth it."
Los Angeles, California, US
“Patrick’s film and TV assessment reports on drama, documentary and entertainment production funding applications are the best I have worked with over the last few years. His analyses are always exhaustive, balanced, and fair. Working with him has made the assessment process so efficient for me.”
Dublin, Ireland